Essay plan: opinion (agree or disagree)

A real IELTS Writing Task 2 question with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.

The question

Healthcare should be free for all citizens and funded by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your 4-paragraph plan

  1. Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the statement and give your clear opinion in one sentence.
  2. Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). First reason you hold this view, with one specific example.
  3. Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). Second reason, or address the strongest point on the other side and explain why your view still holds.
  4. Conclusion (40-50 words). Restate your opinion in fresh words and summarise your two reasons.

The trap in this question type

Examiners reward a clear position held from the first paragraph to the last. Do not sit on the fence, and do not switch sides halfway.

Model answer for this question

Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.

Whether treatment should be free at the point of use, funded by taxation, is among the clearest moral questions a country answers. I agree with government-funded universal healthcare to a very large extent, with the caveat that funding it honestly matters as much as declaring it. The principled case is simple: nobody chooses cancer, and the size of a bank account is a grotesque way to decide who receives chemotherapy. Systems where the sick pay cash produce predictable tragedies, families selling land for surgery, diseases nursed quietly until they become emergencies, women delivering babies without skilled care. The practical case is just as strong: free primary care catches illness early, when it is cheap to treat, and vaccination or screening programmes protect everyone, including the wealthy, since infections do not read payslips. Countries with universal systems consistently spend less per person than those relying on private payment, while living longer. The serious objection is cost and quality: taxes must rise, queues can lengthen, and state monopolies can grow complacent. These are engineering problems rather than refutations. Nations from Britain to Thailand fund universal care at very different income levels, mixing public provision with regulated private options, and their waiting lists, however irritating, are a milder injustice than exclusion by poverty. In conclusion, healthcare free at the point of use is both morally right and economically intelligent. I support it almost without reservation, asking only that governments fund it truthfully instead of promising it cheaply.

Why this answer scores

  1. Moral and practical arguments are separated cleanly, then the main objection is faced directly.
  2. 'Infections do not read payslips' compresses a public-health argument into six words.
  3. The extent of agreement is graded ('almost without reservation'), matching the question stem.

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