Essay plan: discussion (discuss both views)
A real IELTS Writing Task 2 question with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.
The question
Some people believe that university education should be free for everyone, while others think students should pay for their own studies. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Your 4-paragraph plan
- Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase both views, then state which one you lean towards.
- Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). Explain the first view fairly, with an example, even if you disagree with it.
- Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). Explain the second view, then make clear why you find it stronger.
- Conclusion (40-50 words). Summarise both sides in one sentence each and confirm your position.
The trap in this question type
You must cover BOTH views to score well on Task Response. One-sided answers cap your band even when the writing is excellent.
Model answer for this question
Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.
Whether governments should fund university studies for every citizen or leave the bill to students themselves remains a divisive question. While I accept that personal payment brings a sense of responsibility, I believe free higher education serves both individuals and society far better.
Those who defend tuition fees argue that students who pay for their studies take them more seriously. A young person covering their own fees at a private university, for example, is less likely to skip lectures than one who risks nothing financially. Supporters also note that public money is limited, and that every naira or dollar spent on degrees is money not spent on hospitals or primary schools, which serve everyone rather than a fortunate minority.
However, charging fees filters people by wealth rather than by talent. When a brilliant student from a low-income family abandons the dream of becoming an engineer because the fees equal several years of her parents' earnings, the whole country loses the bridges she would have built. Nations such as Germany, which abolished tuition fees, still produce disciplined graduates, which suggests that commitment comes from opportunity, not from invoices. Free education also pays for itself over time, since graduates earn more and return the investment through decades of higher taxes.
In conclusion, although self-funded study may encourage some seriousness, I side firmly with free university education, because a system that develops its brightest minds regardless of family income enriches everyone in the end.
Why this answer scores
- The writer's position is stated in the introduction and never wavers, which protects Task Response.
- Both views get a full paragraph each, and the second is clearly marked as stronger with 'However'.
- Concrete, specific support (Germany, the engineering student) replaces vague claims like 'many people say'.