Essay plan: problem and solution
A real IELTS Writing Task 2 question with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.
The question
International tourism has grown enormously in recent decades. What problems does this cause, and what solutions can you suggest?
Your 4-paragraph plan
- Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the issue and preview that you will cover causes and solutions.
- Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). The main cause or problem, with a specific example of its effect.
- Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). One or two realistic solutions, saying who should act (government, schools, individuals).
- Conclusion (40-50 words). Summarise the problem and your strongest solution.
The trap in this question type
Vague solutions like 'raise awareness' score poorly. Name who acts and what exactly they do, then say what changes as a result.
Model answer for this question
Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.
Tourism now moves more than a billion people a year, and the places they visit feel both the money and the weight. The main problems are environmental strain, cultural erosion and distorted local economies; each has workable solutions if governments treat tourism as something to manage rather than simply maximise.
The first problem is physical. Beaches, reefs and historic streets were never designed for millions of feet, and the water demands of hotels can drain regions where residents already ration. Second, culture bends toward the camera: ceremonies become performances, and city centres fill with souvenir shops while bakeries and schools retreat. Third, the profits often leave on the same planes as the visitors, flowing to international chains while locals compete for seasonal, low-paid work and watch rents climb beyond their salaries.
The solutions follow the problems. Environmentally, caps on daily visitors, as used at Machu Picchu, and meaningful tourist taxes fund conservation and force the industry to price its true costs. Culturally, licensing that favours resident-owned guesthouses, guides and restaurants keeps money and dignity in the community. Economically, governments can require hotel chains to hire and train locally and can promote off-season travel to spread income across the year instead of concentrating it in a crushing peak.
In short, tourism's problems are the predictable results of treating visitor numbers as the only measure of success. Managed with limits, local ownership and honest pricing, the industry can enrich destinations instead of slowly consuming them.
Why this answer scores
- Problems and solutions are mapped one-to-one, which makes the essay easy to follow and complete.
- Machu Picchu provides the required concrete example without derailing the paragraph.
- Strong verbs carry the imagery: profits 'leave on the same planes', tourism 'consuming' destinations.