Essay plan: opinion (agree or disagree)

A real IELTS Writing Task 2 question with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.

The question

In some countries, the consumption of fast food is increasing. What are the causes of this, and what effects does it have on individuals and society?

Your 4-paragraph plan

  1. Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the statement and give your clear opinion in one sentence.
  2. Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). First reason you hold this view, with one specific example.
  3. Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). Second reason, or address the strongest point on the other side and explain why your view still holds.
  4. Conclusion (40-50 words). Restate your opinion in fresh words and summarise your two reasons.

The trap in this question type

Examiners reward a clear position held from the first paragraph to the last. Do not sit on the fence, and do not switch sides halfway.

Model answer for this question

Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.

Across the developing and developed world alike, fast food has moved from occasional treat to daily habit. The causes lie in changing work patterns, price and marketing, and the effects reach from individual waistlines to national health budgets. The strongest cause is time. Urban life increasingly means long commutes and double-income households, so the hour once spent cooking has been surrendered to traffic and overtime, and a wrapped burger fills the gap. Price reinforces the habit, since processed meals are often cheaper than fresh ingredients, especially in cities where a plate of rice and stew from a fast food chain undercuts the market cost of cooking it. Marketing completes the circle: children are courted with toys and cartoons decades before they read a nutrition label, building brand loyalty that outlives childhood. The effects unfold in stages. Individually, diets heavy in salt, sugar and refined oil drive obesity, hypertension and type 2 diabetes, diseases once associated with wealth that now concentrate among the poor. Socially, the costs migrate to public health systems, where treating diet-related illness swallows money that could have built schools. There is a quieter cultural effect too: family recipes and communal cooking, which once bound households together, fade within a single generation. In conclusion, fast food spreads because it fits modern schedules, budgets and childhood memories, and its consequences are paid by bodies, health budgets and traditions. Any response must make healthy food as convenient and affordable as its rival.

Why this answer scores

  1. Causes and effects each get a structured paragraph, with effects layered from personal to national.
  2. The essay stays analytical rather than preachy, which suits the neutral question type.
  3. Phrases like 'surrendered to traffic and overtime' show lexical range with zero forced idioms.

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