Band 8 model answer: opinion (agree or disagree)

A band 8 model answer to a real IELTS Writing Task 2 question, with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.

The question

In many countries, food delivery apps have dramatically changed the way people eat and shop. What are the reasons for this trend, and do you think its effects on society are more positive or negative?

Your 4-paragraph plan

  1. Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the statement and give your clear opinion in one sentence.
  2. Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). First reason you hold this view, with one specific example.
  3. Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). Second reason, or address the strongest point on the other side and explain why your view still holds.
  4. Conclusion (40-50 words). Restate your opinion in fresh words and summarise your two reasons.

The trap in this question type

Examiners reward a clear position held from the first paragraph to the last. Do not sit on the fence, and do not switch sides halfway.

Model answer for this question

Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.

A decade ago, ordering dinner meant phoning a single pizza restaurant; now an app like Grab in Singapore or Swiggy in India puts three hundred restaurants on one screen with a rider arriving in twenty minutes. This shift has clear causes, and while it brings genuine convenience, I believe its overall social effect is negative. The trend is driven by two forces. First, urban working hours have lengthened: a Bangalore software engineer putting in eleven-hour days simply has no time to cook, and delivery apps fill that gap. Second, the apps themselves manufacture demand through subsidies and gamified discounts, so ordering becomes habitual rather than occasional, with users tapping the app for a single coffee rather than walking to the corner cafe. Despite this convenience, the negative consequences run deeper. Public health is one casualty: a 2022 study by the Indian Council of Medical Research linked rising urban obesity rates directly to the frequency of app-based food ordering, since delivery menus favour fried, calorie-dense items over home-cooked meals. Labour conditions are another concern. Riders for companies like Deliveroo in the UK are classified as independent contractors, paid per delivery rather than per hour, which pushes many to skip meals and race through red lights to hit unrealistic time targets, a trade-off consumers rarely see when they track their order on a map. Finally, the apps hollow out local social life: small family restaurants in cities like Manila now exist mainly as anonymous kitchen units on an app's back end, losing the walk-in customers who once knew the owner by name, which quietly erodes neighbourhood identity. Convenience alone does not offset these costs. The efficiency that delivery apps offer comes bundled with poorer diets, precarious gig work, and thinner community ties, and unless governments regulate rider pay and app-driven marketing, I expect these negative effects to outweigh the benefits as the trend continues to grow.

Why this answer scores

  1. Naming specific apps and cities, 'Grab in Singapore or Swiggy in India' and 'Deliveroo in the UK', grounds the essay in real, checkable detail rather than vague generalisation.
  2. Citing a specific body, 'a 2022 study by the Indian Council of Medical Research', gives the health argument the concrete evidentiary weight examiners reward at band 8-9.
  3. The essay keeps one clear stance throughout, stated early as 'I believe its overall social effect is negative' and reaffirmed in the conclusion, satisfying the coherence criterion.

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