Band 8 model answer: opinion (agree or disagree)

A band 8 model answer to a real IELTS Writing Task 2 question, with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.

The question

In many countries, traditional handwriting skills are declining as people increasingly rely on typing and digital devices for writing. What are the causes of this decline, and do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Your 4-paragraph plan

  1. Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the statement and give your clear opinion in one sentence.
  2. Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). First reason you hold this view, with one specific example.
  3. Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). Second reason, or address the strongest point on the other side and explain why your view still holds.
  4. Conclusion (40-50 words). Restate your opinion in fresh words and summarise your two reasons.

The trap in this question type

Examiners reward a clear position held from the first paragraph to the last. Do not sit on the fence, and do not switch sides halfway.

Model answer for this question

Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.

A Korean primary school teacher I know now spends barely two lessons a week on penmanship, compared with the daily calligraphy drills she herself endured as a child in the 1990s. This shift, replicated in classrooms across the world, has clear causes, and I regard it as a largely negative development despite its practical conveniences. The primary cause is the sheer efficiency of typing. A university student writing a 2,000 word essay can produce it on a laptop in a fraction of the time handwriting would take, with the added benefit of instant spell checking and easy editing. Smartphones and messaging apps have also normalised short, typed communication from an early age, so children practise thumb typing on a phone screen long before they master holding a pen. Schools, under pressure to prepare students for standardised computer based exams, such as the digital SAT introduced in the United States, have correspondingly reduced time devoted to cursive writing. The consequences, however, are troubling. Neuroscience research from Princeton, cited in classroom teaching guides, shows that the physical act of forming letters by hand activates memory centres more effectively than typing, meaning students who take notes on laptops often retain less. There is also a cultural loss: countries like India and China have centuries old calligraphic traditions, and a generation unable to write characters fluently by hand risks losing a tangible connection to that heritage. Even practically, handwriting remains necessary in situations like signing legal documents or filling out forms during a power outage, and I have watched adults struggle to write a simple birthday card because their hand cramps after two sentences. That said, I would not romanticise the past entirely; typing has undeniably widened access to writing for people with motor impairments, who previously struggled with pens. Yet on balance, given the cognitive and cultural costs, I believe schools should preserve at least a modest place for handwriting instruction rather than abandoning it wholesale in favour of screens.

Why this answer scores

  1. The concrete anecdote 'A Korean primary school teacher... barely two lessons a week' grounds the essay in a specific, believable situation rather than vague generalisation.
  2. Citing 'Neuroscience research from Princeton' as a specific source shows an examiner the writer can support claims with textured, real-sounding evidence.
  3. The concession 'I would not romanticise the past entirely; typing has undeniably widened access... for people with motor impairments' shows honest handling of complexity while keeping one clear position.

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