Essay plan: advantages and disadvantages

A real IELTS Writing Task 2 question with the paragraph plan that fits it. Aim for 250 to 290 words in 40 minutes.

The question

In some countries, employees are being given the legal right to ignore work-related emails and calls outside office hours. Why has this become an issue, and do the benefits of such 'right to disconnect' laws outweigh the drawbacks?

Your 4-paragraph plan

  1. Introduction (40-50 words). Paraphrase the topic and say whether the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
  2. Body paragraph 1 (80-100 words). The strongest advantage, developed with a concrete example.
  3. Body paragraph 2 (80-100 words). The main disadvantage, developed honestly, then weighed against the advantage.
  4. Conclusion (40-50 words). State your overall judgement: which side wins and why.

The trap in this question type

The question usually asks whether the advantages OUTWEIGH the disadvantages. Answer that comparison directly, not just a list of each.

Model answer for this question

Written for this exact question in the official format. Read it once for ideas, then write your own before comparing.

The growing expectation that staff remain reachable via smartphones at all hours has pushed several governments, including France and more recently parts of Australia, to legislate a 'right to disconnect'. This issue has emerged largely because of technology's erosion of the boundary between work and personal life, and I believe the benefits of such laws outweigh the drawbacks. The rise of this problem stems directly from constant digital connectivity. A decade ago, once an employee left the office, work effectively stopped. Now, a manager can send a message at ten at night and expect a reply, and employees fear that ignoring it will be read as poor commitment. Studies by organisations such as the World Health Organization have linked this always-on culture to rising rates of burnout, anxiety and sleep disruption. It is this measurable harm to wellbeing that has driven policymakers to intervene. The primary benefit of right to disconnect laws is protecting mental health without sacrificing productivity. When France introduced its law in 2017, companies like the insurer AXA reported no decline in output, suggesting that rested employees work efficiently during contracted hours rather than being perpetually, and inefficiently, half-engaged. Such laws also force organisations to plan communication more deliberately, reducing the trivial after-hours messages that often only create stress rather than genuine progress. Admittedly, there are drawbacks. Global businesses coordinating across time zones, such as a Sydney-based team working with New York, may find rigid rules impractical, since urgent matters cannot always wait until the next business day. Small startups, too, sometimes rely on flexibility rather than strict hours to compete. However, these problems can be addressed through exemptions for genuine emergencies rather than by abandoning the principle altogether. In conclusion, while such legislation requires careful calibration for certain industries, its capacity to safeguard employee health and encourage more disciplined workplace communication makes it a net positive. Governments elsewhere would do well to consider similar protections.

Why this answer scores

  1. It takes a clear, consistent stance (benefits outweigh drawbacks) and never wavers, which examiners reward under Task Response.
  2. Specific real examples (France's 2017 law, AXA, WHO research, Sydney-New York time zones) replace vague generalisations, demonstrating strong development of ideas.
  3. A range of complex structures and cohesive devices (concession with 'admittedly', linking phrases like 'it is this measurable harm that') show the grammatical range and coherence expected at band 8-9.

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